the thought occured
i loved you
and it was like someone
tore me open and started plucking
stuff out-
important stuff- a lung,
my kidney, chunks of heart.
over the empty spaces,
i tried to write your name
but the ink didn’t take.
it was just that simple,
how i was torn.
………
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/2017/12/22/torn/
Hey! You might want to copy the pingback link in the HTML code to be seen on the prompt list. This is today’s code, paste it in the HTML (not visual) tab.
Torn
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Ugh. Thanks!! I always have trouble with getting this right and I appreciate your generosity.
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Yes, the instructions aren’t that clear, it took me a couple of tries to get it right as well, so I understand your frustration! and my code became text because it’s a functional code haha!
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I think I got it this time. Maybe?? Thanks again. And thanks for stopping by! Did you like the poem?
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yes I enjoyed it. I’m afraid you still haven’t got it right! It’s always worth trying to see a preview. When writing there are two tabs , visual, and Html. You have to make sure to post the pingback completely in the HTML, and it should only display the word ‘Torn’.
Some people would even use that word in the poem itself, as it would link itself to the prompt, rather than showing as a link. I’m not sure how I can explain better? but you can look at other’s prompts to see how it should look
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Thanks again. I tried these adjustments. Hopefully these work… maybe it’s because I’m working from my phone?
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yes it worked now! sorry I’m a bit late! I’ve never tried the phone, glad I could help 😀
and once again, nice poem 😉
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Thank you so much for helping me!!! That was beautiful and kind of you. Xoxo.
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Yes, the instructions are not clear, but this poem it’s a wow!
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Thank you very much.
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This is so beautiful, I really liked reading this.
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Thank you so much. No one ever comments on my poems so it it super special to me to get comments on them. I love hearing from people. Have a gorgeous day. Xoxo
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You have an amazing day and I am glad you like it.
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Loved your poem!!!! I can totally relate!
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Thank you so much. I really love when people resonate with my little poem stories. Thank you for reading and commenting. Xoxoxo. I hope your heart is well.
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